Business Writing
Training
We understand
that being able to write in a clear and professional style
is important to your business. That is why we have developed
the Business Writing Institute
and the Effective
Business Writing seminar. This practice-driven
business writing
workshop
will significantly improve your ability to write in English,
so that your readers will receive a clear, concise, effective
message. Most professionals spend at least 15-20% of their
time writing for business; emails, memos, business
letters, reports
and other business correspondence. Our customized
approach guarantees an improvement in
business communication skills
that will increase your productivity, success and job satisfaction.
Learn more about our
business writing courses
here, or contact us for more
information.
Benefits of business writing
training classes:
- learn how to write a business letter
- discover the skills of writing a
business letter
- learn to create clear business
correspondence
- understand the difference of writing
for business
- improve overall business
communication
Business Writing Training: Business Communication Writing
Skills Benefit From Originality and Media Based Marketing
Training
From the attic came an unearthly howl. The whole scene had
an eerie, surreal quality, like when you're on vacation in
another city and Jeopardy comes on at 7:00 p.m. instead of
7:30."
~anonymous high school essay
Greetings. Thank you for indulging me in yet another example
of analogies collected by high school English teachers. I do
so because the language we all share is a treasure chest of
words that in the odd combination can make us smile, chuckle,
even laugh out loud. And, like Larry the Cat -- whose house we
share and whose antics are just plain goofy -- the best humor
is unintentional humor.
Anyway, the gaffe above resulted from a sincere, albeit
immature, effort to be original and evocative. Good for him or
her, I say. At least the brain has been engaged. But what
about the way us adults fall into shallow "copycatism" when we
communicate in a professional setting? And how does that
reflect on you and your business communications when you
mindlessly insert those phrases in your website text or
emails? Do you really want to sound like a faceless,
unimaginative bureaucrat when it comes to writing skills?
Herewith some inaugural entries in my Language Hall of Shame:
• Negatively impact, as in "Our failure to fabricate even one
paper clip that actually holds two sheets of paper together is
negatively impacting our sales performance." First of all,
"impact" became a verb only about 30 years ago, even though
the verbs "affect" or "influence" did the job quite nicely.
But now that it's here, why compound the damage by adding an
awkward adverb (fellow Mainer Stephen King said in his book on
writing, "The adverb is not your friend.")? Why not rely
instead on unambiguous, active, space-saving standbys such as
"harm" or "hurt?"
• Core competencies, as in "Our core competencies include a
flexible attitude about quality control and a collective
tendency to stretch the lunch hour beyond normal parameters
because we adhere to the principle of saving personal energy."
Does anyone realize that by using the adjective "core" to
define "competencies," you're implying that you have other
"competencies" that might not be so "core?" And that a careful
reader could deduce that those other competencies might
actually be subpar, or least rather pedestrian? Here's a
solution, in plain English: "What we do best is..." or "Our
reputation rests on the way we..." or "We are known for..."
I bring this up because I don't doubt that your readers are
critical thinkers (at least that's what I tell my writing
seminar students to expect), which means they will view
phrases like "core competencies" as lazy, unproductive
thinking.
• Skill sets, as in "Our employees can bring the most unique
set of skill sets to finding a solution to your problem, which
is why we consider ourselves a high-end firm that can justify
overcharging you for our services." First of all, you can't be
"most unique" because "unique" means one of a kind. I used to
think that foolishness was restricted to the sports broadcast
booth, but now I'm seeing it on websites, which was probably
inevitable.
Anyway, I ask you: What's wrong with just using "skills?" How
can adding "sets" possibly add anything beyond the useless
appendage of another four-letter word? If you use "skills
sets," ask yourself: "Why? What have I gained beyond the
obvious tendency to imitate others unthinkingly?"
The News Media...Not Always Nosy Busybodies
"Literature is the art of writing something that will be read
twice; journalism what will be grasped at once."
-- Cyril Connolly, English writer
Learning to deal with the press constructively need not be
limited to traditional definitions of news. Some realistic
role-playing in a media training setting can, in fact, help
you frame and sharpen your message for commercial purposes.
That's where I can be of assistance. As a former newspaper and
magazine reporter, I like to know how things work and what
sets them apart. Then I try to pass on what I've learned in
succinct prose, as Connolly noted.
Let me describe the sort of training I do. A couple years ago,
a clever nurse in Maine came up with a blend of four aromatic
oils that she said eased the nausea of first-trimester
pregnancy, chemotherapy and motion sickness. To help with
marketing, I put her through questions a reporter for the
business section of a newspaper or magazine might ask. Then I
wrote an article about her "aromatherapy," which we discussed
in detail for lessons learned.
The result? She and her marketing and investment associates
came out of the exercise with a much clearer view of how the
public would perceive their unusual product. The questions I
asked were born of healthy skepticism, and she said she
planned to adjust her pitch accordingly.
Please visit my website at http://www.davegriffithscommunications.com,
where you'll find that I've worked with a variety of
government, nonprofit and private-sector clients on business
communication skills -- from effective writing to presentation
skills to media training.
I travel widely to do writing skills training and media and
presentation skills training for clients ranging from the U.S.
Coast Guard to the Red Cross to the Department of Homeland
Security to the Veterans Administration to the National
Nuclear Security Administration to Navy SEALs to senior
executives at a variety of federal agencies to businesses that
need help with technical writing and written sales proposals.
My professional background is journalism, having reported for
the Kansas City Star and covered national security for several
publications, including Business Week magazine. After leaving
Washington, I was a member of the Penn State journalism
faculty for six years. I have a degree in English from the
University of Virginia and a masters in journalism from the
University of Missouri, and served as a U.S. Army field
artillery officer in Germany and Vietnam. I live with my wife
and two sons in a small town in Maine, where I publish a
municipal newsletter and chair a school board.
Source: Dave Griffiths
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